Jaden G.

I think the best fit at a time of total emotional blow up works. Oh, and Risa is with me on this too since we talked about it, but what ...

Jaden- “Alright, now we need to find you some new clothes,” I said. “What’s wrong with our clothes now?” Lillith asked. I am learning the names. HAH! “The problem is ...

It was a good prolouge that makes you want to know what led up to this moment. Keep the story coming. Now to the critique. Comma use in the beginning ...

Whoops, I forgot about them. :}

Jaden- My hands went to the blade on my side at the challenge. It was just a dagger, but then I remembered that they’re just teenagers so I just withdrew ...

Jaden- Great, they were going to have me prove it. Well, I could show them all of the maps in my bag, but they would think that we had made ...

We're still here. I just updated on the storybook. :) I like the Element of illusion. That is sweet.

Jaden- I stood there, quietly calculating the teenagers in front of me. Please tell me that I wasn’t like this so long ago. Some shouted questions like “where are we?” ...

I agree. What element should Sarnom be? Risa says vegitation but that doesn't really explain how he is so powerful. Also, if all the other elementals are dead and only ...

Or maybe, because he was an evil elemental who betrayed the others, he wanted to steal all of their power. But before Sarnom could, Sam and Jaden took the powers, ...

Twili- “What the…” but I wasn’t allowed to finish my sentence. A sudden feeling of dread washed over me as all sound dissapeared. I tried to fight the pulling sensation ...

Hey, May and I talked about this. I think that it would be cool if the mentors were what is left of the old elementals and are training the new ...

With us looking different I was thinking taller and different clothes. I would have to find a picture of what I'm thinking about later. As for the weapons, it should ...

Maki Chan, you did have Twili who is the friend of Lilith from what I remember. Oh, and TN told me a while ago that she's not coming back, so ...

Jaden Well, at least I knew my time wasn’t completely wasted. Finding an elemental kid is important, but now I had to think of an excuse to tell my class. ...